Yesss! I agree about the characterization of Posey--love the description of her face "shifting bank of clouds." P.S. I am trying to get a little substack going myself though as a poet, prose can be agonizing because I stew over every sentence... you and I met in Mathias' Hopkins workshop a while back. Love your work on here!
Yesss! I agree about the characterization of Posey--love the description of her face "shifting bank of clouds." P.S. I am trying to get a little substack going myself though as a poet, prose can be agonizing because I stew over every sentence... you and I met in Mathias' Hopkins workshop a while back. Love your work on here!
This is great, please write a series.
Done.